2011年9月27日 星期二

School Life

    I am studying at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. My school life is cheerful except for I should spend long time in waiting for bus. I am glad to have so many lovely classmates to learn and experience a lot of activities together.
    I remember when I was a second grade student; school chose some people to be picket. Because I went to school early, I was been chose in. Not knowing things in this job, I gave it a try and tried to do my best on it.  Little did I know that I would be the picket leader for the team of correct someone else’s clothes. Some of the people often wore the wrong clothes to school. Of that, we should tell them and register them. But sometimes people’s attitude is not good. They feel nervous and say something bad on us. So we learn how to make our mind happy and take a good attitude to schoolmates.
    Being English major, I study English every day. I study not only the textbooks but also English magazines. I believe that the more I read, the better reading ability and the more vocabulary I will have.  By working hard, my reading ability has improved a lot.  With my teachers’ encouragement, I took the General English Proficiency Test and passed the elementary level. After that, I took the intermediate level of GEPT. Though I didn’t pass the reading tests, I knew my English ability still left something to be desired. I was to there are many things can do such as reviewing vocabularies, thinking or just take times enjoying the since, if I really want to.

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  1. My school life is cheerful except for I should spend long time in waiting for bus.
    -spend long time "on" waiting bus.

    Because I went to school early, I was been chose in.
    -Because I went to school early, I was chosen to be one of the pickets~ (糾察隊嗎?!:))

    Not knowing things in this job, I gave it a try and tried to do my best on it.
    -on it 可以不用寫沒關係
    Not knowing how to do the job這樣會比較ok

    They feel nervous and say something bad on us.
    -on us 感覺怪怪的 the feel nervous and speak ill of us.

    Being English major, I study English every day.
    -As a student majoring in English, I study English every day.

    最後一段第三行I will have.
    改成I will get


    I was to there are many things can do such as reviewing vocabularies, thinking or just take times enjoying the since, if I really want to.
    -抱歉~這句我有點看不懂 :>

    大致這樣 :>

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  2. My school life is cheerful except for I should spend long time in waiting for bus.
    except後面要加個that喔~
    或改-->My school life is cheerful except for my spending much time in waiting for bus. 比較精簡喔~

    chose some people to be picket. -->chose some people to be pickets.

    Because I went to school early, I was been chose in. -->
    Because I went to school early, I was been chosen for it .

    Not knowing things in this job,-->Out of my
    strong curiosity, 

    Little did I know that I would be the picket leader for the team of correct someone else’s clothes. --->
    Little did I know that I would be the picket leader of the team to correct others' uniforms.比較好喔

    Some of the people often wore the wrong clothes to school.Of that, we should tell them and register them. --->
    Those who didn't follow the clothing restrictions would be registered by me.

    But sometimes people’s attitude is not good.
    -->But sometimes people’s attitude were not good.

    They feel nervous and say something bad on us.-->They looked unfriendly and spoke ill on us.

    So we learn how to make our mind happy and take a good attitude to schoolmates.-->
    So we had to learn how to keep in a good mood and take a good attitude toward schoolmates.

    lily~記得時態要一致喔!!

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  3. My school life is cheerful except for I should spend long time in waiting for bus.這句我覺得可不用~有點多

    They feel nervous and say something bad on us.=>~nervous and insult us.

    So we learn how to make our mind happy and take a good attitude to schoolmates.=>So we learn how to stay in a good mood even something bad happen. We also have positive~

    After that, I took the intermediate level of GEPT. Though I didn’t pass the reading tests,這一句話其實不確定,如果之後你有過的話,要再把他補上去喔~~

    I was to there are many things can do such as reviewing vocabularies, thinking or just take times enjoying the since, if I really want to.=>前面那一句話我看不懂,最後一句可以不用,感覺有點小任性~~

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  4. I was been chose in.
    was 和benn十太不一樣不可能同時出現喔

    I was to 這具的文法是錯誤的 看不懂~~

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