Discussing effect - 2 - revised

Many people drink a cup of coffee every morning. It becomes their daily hobbies. Drinking a moderate amount of caffeine probably won’t do you any harm. But drinking too much caffeine can have negative effects on your health. A great many people drink more than a cup of coffee a day. If you drink four to seven cups of coffee a day, it caffeine contains more than 500 to 600.

First, caffeine will make people feel excited and feel wakeful. If you drink too much, probably it will make you suffer from insomnia. Seriously, it also might lead irregular heartbeat nervousness. That would be very terrible. Second, if you use caffeine for a long time, the opportunity for those who makes people suffer from anxiety muscle, tremors, nausea or other gastrointestinal problems are more than people who do not drink too much coffee or tea.

There are some of caffeine in coffee, tea and Cola. People like to drink them very much. But, you must be careful and don’t drink too much, or disease will be coming.

Best of the semester - 3 - Discussing effect - 1

Acton is a small town in the Midwest. Stanley Manufacturing decided to open a large factory in Action. This will bring many people to the community. Some people are excited about the positive effects the new factory will have, and I have no exception. I think it is a good thing to Acton. First, the factory will bring more job opportunities in the Acton. The factory can provide many vacant positions for the locals, even appeal to foreigners, which can promote the economy of Acton. I consider that Singapore is a good example and good to Acton to imitate it. The place in Singapore is very small. But they rejected their natural environment. They set two property which the other country didn’t want to bring – a lot of casino and petrifaction property. In this century, people compete for a job and just hope to earn enough money to live. So there are a lot of potential things in Singapore. I hope the future of Acton will like Singapore. In this century, people compete to any job. Just hope can bring enough money to live. More jobs will bring more hopes.

Best of the semester - 2 - Express an opinion - 1

Is using nuclear power to solve the energy crisis a right thing? I don’t think so. In my opinion, nuclear power has a lot of danger of unsure factors. You can’t know when the danger will happen. I think the best example is The 2011 Tahoka earthquake. The earthquake led to Fukushima Nuclear Power Plants radiated divergence when the earthquake hit Japan, which made us face this problem. This problem led almost hundred people were infected to disease. According that, German resisted and opposed to use the Nuclear Power Plants. Of the people in German insist on dismantle the Nuclear Power Plants and never emerge from their dominion. After all, they have a lot of energy alternative which can use. In order to keep our earth from danger, we should not continue to destroy it. And if we put more emphasis on environmental protection, we can make this world more wonderful.

Discussing causes - 2 - revised

On December 19, Mr. Williams closed his shop. It's a pity for me because the music store which had caught my attention for a long time is my favorite store. There were several reasons which caused the close of the shop.
  The store is located next to the lobby on the ground floor of the Fairfax Apartment Building. First, according to the local data, we could know that the age of people in this apartment building lied in fifty-one to sixty year-old. However, the majority of CDs in this shop were hip-hop and rock which couldn’t appeal to people in this apartment. I think most people in apartment don’t like this. Second, according to the papers, we could know the amount of people who passed by the store. The shop was open in the period of one to five p.m. from Monday to Friday. Nevertheless, the stream of people usually existed from six to twelve p.m. In addition, there were two large music stores from a shopping center only for three miles away. Due to above-reasons, no wonder the business of the shop would be close in the end. Maybe next time I can provide Mr. Williams with several running methods. Anyone want to take a shop, must find enough information.

Best of the semester - 1 - I don't like rainy day

   A rainy day always makes me sad and blue. Moreover, it also makes me think an unforgettable thing.

   One day, my boyfriend who has been dating with me for three years ago. That day is really meaningful for both of us. To our disappointment, it was raining, so we suggested going to see a movie and going shopping at a mall. Everything was wonderful. After that, we went to a coffee shop to drink a cup of coffee. We talked to each other the secret in our mind. All of a sudden, he said he fall in love with my best friend, Lily. I can’t believe it. At that moment, I felt my heart broken. He said sorry again and again. I couldn’t think anything and ran out of the coffee shop. Because of the heavy rain, I couldn’t see the road. When I had no ideas and walk in the rain with no destination. A car suddenly came out on the road and almost hit me. When I thought that today would be my time of death. My boyfriend pushed me away and was stuck by a car. He died in this accident. He left me; however, he saved me at the end of his life. This thing really makes me feel worse.

   I don’t like rainy day because bad memory records this terrible thing in my mind. In short, I am appreciated that I still alive.

Discussing effect - 1 - revised

   Acton is a small town in the Midwest. Stanley Manufacturing decided to open a large factory in Action. This will bring many people to the community. Some people are excited about the positive effects the new factory will have, and I have no exception. I think it is a good thing to Acton. First, the factory will bring more job opportunities in the Acton. The factory can provide many vacant positions for the locals, even appeal to foreigners, which can promote the economy of Acton. I consider that Singapore is a good example and good to Acton to imitate it. The place in Singapore is very small. But they rejected there natural environment. They set two property which the other country didn’t want to bring – a lot of casino and petrifaction property. In this century, people compete for a job and just hope to earn enough money to live. So there are a lot of potential things in Singapore. I hope the future of Acton will like Singapore. In this century, people compete to any job. Just hope can bring enough money to live. More jobs bring more hopes.

Discussing causes - 1 - revised

In our life, there has been a huge increase in population in our life over the past 150 years. Why did this thing happen? What kind of reason can make it become such a huge change? I think that it is a good question to be explained. I think there are a lot of questions we can be searched. First of all, I think there are so many advances in medicine and health care now that it has made a great difference from before. The century advancement makes medical treatment more progress, and cures more people. Second, the better sanitation also makes this world clear. The personal accomplishment is better than before. People would pick up the garbage on the ground and put into trash cans. Third, people improved farming methods that produce more corps which make us eat healthier. Last but not the least, fewer infants die and more people live longer. Because of people’s efforts, there are a lot of changes to different kinds of areas such as food and sanitation. As a result, we have to treasure all the things we have. And I am glad to see the changing of world.

Express an opinion - 2 - revised

     Many teenagers like to meet people through online dating sites. But is that a good way to meet people through online? I don’t think so. In my opinion, meeting people through online dating sites may result in danger. Generally speaking, the people you meet online are almost strangers. You must have to protect yourself from being exposing in danger if you makes up your mind to go out with he or she. First of all, you can inform your parents or friends of time and dating location. And you must tell the name of the stranger to others. Second, you can go to the dating with your friend. It is much safety. Last but not the least, if the person is a bad guy, you must have to run away, and go to the place where there are many people, and don't forget to call the police. After all, not to meeting any person through online dating sites is the best way.

Express an opinion - 1 - revised

    Is using nuclear power to solve the energy crisis a right thing? I don’t think so. In my opinion, nuclear power has a lot of danger of unsure factors. You can’t know when the danger will happen. I think the best example is The 2011 Tahoka earthquake. The earthquake led to Fukushima Nuclear Power Plants radiated divergence when the earthquake hit Japan, which made us face this problem. According that, German resisted and opposed to use the Nuclear Power Plants. Of the people in German insist on dismantle the Nuclear Power Plants and never emerge from their dominion. After all, they have a lot of energy alternative which can use. In order to keep our earth from danger, we should not continue to destroy it. And if we put more emphasis on environmental protection, we can make this world more wonderful.

Discussing effect - 2

Many people drink a cup of coffee in every morning. It becomes their hobbits. Drinking a moderate amount of caffeine probably won’t cause you any harm. But drinking too much caffeine can have negative effects on your health. Someone not only drink a cup of coffee a day but drink more. If you drink four to seven cups of coffee a day, heavy caffeine use is more than 500 to 600.

First, caffeine is a thing can make people feel exciting and not to want sleep. If you drink too much, probably it will lead insomia fast. Seriously, it also might lead irregular heartbeat nervousness. That would be very terrible. Second, if you use caffeine for long time, the opportunity suffers from anxiety muscle tremors nausea or other gastrointestinal problems headaches are more than people who do not drink too many coffee or tea.

There are some of caffeine in coffee, tea and Cola. People like to drink them very much. But, you must be careful. Don’t drink too much, or disease will be coming.

Comparing - 3 - revised

There are two sports, which I enjoy playing, are similar to each other. There are tennis and volleyball. There are many ways that are the same between tennis and volleyball. Tennis is a ball game and it needs to use hands to play. Similarly, volleyball needs to use hands, too. Both of them have a net for a ball game between one team to the other one. When you play tennis, you must sweep racket to pass balls. It is just like volleyball. But they have a different place. Playing volleyball doesn’t use racket. The most important, you can’t let ball fell down the ground. All you need to do is lead the ball pass to another place.

contrasting - 2 - revised

I am hiring a new English instructor for my school. One day, I took two resumes from people applying for the job. I think to hire an English teacher for junior high school is very difficult. Two of them are wonderful. But I just need to choose one. Debra has more education than Lynn. But Lynn learned more other language more than Debra. They were also awarded many prizes in the past. I am mired in difficulties. Due to those two people have different experiences. So I think it's hard for me to decide. Finally, I chose Debra Fines to be our school’s teacher. Because Debra has more employment experience than Lynn has. I think she can use her professional experience to improve our students' abilities.

不好意思~造成大家的困擾~

真是不好意思，
我家電腦之前就有點壞壞的！
好像有點失靈~
結果就大中毒了~
所以拿去送修~
我還跑去網咖耶~
大概這個周末就會回來了~
請大家多多包含！
真是抱歉啦~

Discussing effect - 1

    Acton is a small town in the Midwest. Stanley Manufacturing decided to open a large factory in Action. This will bring many people to the community. Some people are excited about the positive effects the new factory will have. I think it is a good thing to Acton. First, the factory will bring more jobs in the Acton. The factory can make the people in Acton or another place want to come to this town to bring a job. That can promote the economic of Acton. I consider that Singapore is a good example. The place in there is very small. But they rejected there natural environment. They set two property which the other country didn’t want to bring – a lot of casino and petrifaction property. After all, there is a good geographic location to doing business. So there are a lot of possibility things in Singapore. In this century, people compete to any job. Just hope can bring enough money to live.

Discussing Cause - 2

  On December 19, Mr. Williams closed his shop. Do you know why was this thing happened? This music store is my favorite store. It has attended me for a long time. I think I must to know what happened on it.
  The store is located next to the lobby on the ground floor of the Fairfax Apartment Building. First, according to the graph of residents is the Fairfax by age group, we can know the most people in fifty-one to sixty year-old in this apartment building. But most of the CDs were hip-hop and rock. I think most people in apartment don’t like this. Second, according the following table, we can know number of people who walk past the store. The shop was open Monday to Friday from one to five p.m. But people walk past the store almost from six p.m. to twelve p.m. And three miles away from a shopping center that has two large music stores. Maybe next time I can suggest Mr. Williams set the store at the good place.

Discussing Cause - 1

  In our life, over the past 150 years there has been a huge increase in population. Why was this thing happened? What the reason can make it become such as huge change? I think it is a good question to explain.  In the population, I think there are a lot of question we can be search. First of all, I think advances in medicine and health care is a lot of difference than before. The century advancement makes medical treatment more progress, and cures more people. Second, the better sanitation also makes this world clearly. The personal accomplishment is better than before. People would pick up the garbage into the trash. Third, people improved farming methods that produce more and better food, and make us eat healthily. Last not the least, fewer infant deaths and more people living longer. Because people’s efforts. There are a lot of changes about the world. We have to pressure the thing we have.

Express an opinion - 2

Many teenager like to meeting people through online dating sites. But is that a good thing? I don’t think so. In my opinion, meeting people through online dating sites have many dangers. Properly, the person you meet in online almost is a stranger. You must be protecting yourself. If you really go out with the person you meet in online. First of all, you can talk to your parents or your friends where and when you meet the person. And you must talk the name of the stranger to others. Second, you can go to the dating with your friend. It is much safety. Last not the least, if the person is a bad guy. You must run away, go to the place have many people, and call the police. After all, not to meeting any people through online dating sites are the best way.

Express an opinion - 1

    Is that using nuclear power to sole the energy crisis a right thing? I don’t think so. In my opinion, nuclear power has a lot of danger of unsure factor. You can’t know when the danger will happen. I think the best ensample is The 2011 Tahoka earthquake. The earthquake leads Fukushima Nuclear Power Plants radiate divergence when it hit Japan. This happened make us to face this problem. After German to resist and oppose, the Nuclear Power Plants never emerge from their dominion. After all, they have a lot of energy alternative which can use. To save a good earth that we can make this world more wonderful.