Comparing - 2 - revised

  One day, there were two drivers’ licenses in the police office. Both of their owners wanted to take the driver’s licenses back. After they saw each other, they couldn’t believe that the information of them is similar. Stephanie Brooks has brown eyes and black hairs. Likewise, Ann Friedman also has brown eyes and black hairs. Stephanie’s height is as high as Ann’s. To their surprise, the birthday of them is on the same day. They think they are like twins. After that, they become very good friends.

Comparing - 1 - revised

There are two important Americans, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson. They are not only two crucial Americans but also have some same things.

Both of them are important persons in the American Revolution. When they were students, John Adams studied and practiced law. Likewise, Thomas Jefferson studied and practiced law. And they were delegated to the Continental Congress. After that, John Adams was a signer of Declaration of Independence. Similarly, Thomas Jefferson was a signer of Declaration of Independence. John Adams was second U.S. president and so was Jefferson.

There were too many incredible things between John Adams and Thomas Jefferson. Both of them died on the same day, July 4, 1826. They not only did the same thing but also had amazing achievement.

Contrasting - 2

I am hiring a new English teacher instructor for my school. One day, I took two resumes from people applying for the job. To hire an English teacher for junior high school is very difficult. Two of them are wonderful. But I just need to choose one. Debra has more education than Lynn. But Lynn learned other language more than Debra. They also took award in past. I am mired in difficulties. Finally, I chose Debra Fines to be our school’s teacher. Because Debra has more employment experience than Lynn has. I think she can use her experience to teach our students.

Contrasting - 1

My friend and I are looking for an apartment to share near campus. I saw two descriptions of apartments on the Internet. My friend and I decided to choose one from these two. There are very different to each other. Fairfax Apartments has large two bedrooms and have furnished. However, CAMPUS APTS only have one bedroom and unfurnished. If I live in CAMPUS APTS, I need to buy furniture. After we think twice, we decided to rent Fairfax Apartments. Because it’s not too expensive that the entire thing is done. We think it is wonderful to us.

Comparing - 3

Two sports I enjoy that are similar to each other. I enjoy playing tennis and volley ball. They have very the same place to each other. Tennis is a ball game and which make use of hand a lot. Otherwise, volley ball is also need to use hand. Both of they have a net for ball game between one team and the other team. When you play tennis, you must to sweep racket to pass ball. It is just like volley ball. But they have a different place. Playing volley ball doesn’t use racket. The most important, you can’t lead ball fell down the ground. All you need to do is lead the ball pass to other place.

I don't like rainy day - revised

  A rainy day always makes me sad and blue. Moreover, it also makes me think an unforgettable thing.

   One day, my boyfriend who has been dating with me for three years ago. That day is really meaningful for both of us. To our disappointment, it was raining, so we went to see a movie and went shopping at a mall. Everything was wonderful. After that, we went to a coffee shop to drink a cup of coffee. All of a sudden, he said he fall in love with my best friend, Lily. At that moment, I felt my heart broken. He said sorry again and again. I couldn’t think anything and ran out of the coffee shop. Because of the heavy rain, I couldn’t see the road. When I had no ideas and walk in the rain with no destination. A car suddenly came out on the road and almost hit me. When I thought that today would be my time of death. My boyfriend pushed me away and was stuck by a car. He died in this accident. He left me; however, he saved me at the end of his life. This thing really makes me feel worse.

   I don’t like rainy day because bad memory records this terrible thing in my mind. But I am appreciated that I still alive.

Describing a person - revised

   My sister got lost when we took a trip to Spain. When we went to a Bull-Fight Festival, there were crowded with people. After a chaos, my sister got lost. I was afraid that she got an accident. Her name is Amy. She has a long, curly brown hair and a small face. And she has a small nose and big eyes. She always wears smile on the face. She is thin, medium height, and thirteen years old. When she was last seen, she was dressed in a pink hat, a white T-shirt and blue jeans. She is a Taiwanese, and she can not speak English very well. But she is so brave that she can talk to others. When you can saw a girl with Chinese face, I believe it is her. So I need your help. If you find her, please call the Royal Hotel, 0800-123-456. I will give you ten thousand dollars. We have gone there almost five days. My sister will know how to contact with me when she went there. Please everyone help me to find her, and call me as soon as possible. Thank you very much.

Describing a Process - 4 - How to do plan a trip - revised

   Planning a trip can be easy and be a sense of achievement. Have you ever planed a fantastic trip? I planned a trip in a winter vacation and went with my friends. To begin with, I need to decide where and when to have a trip and who would go with me. For example, Taipei International Book Exhibition began in winter vacation. There were two of my friends who like the books and want to go with me. Because of our parents' regulations, we only can go to Taipei for two days. Second, I need to find a place to live. So I went to see a cheap and clean hotel in the Internet. It is very important to me. If I did not find a good hotel to get a good sleep, I would feel unhappy in those two days. After that, I make up my mind where to go and how to get there. We went to everywhere by the MRT. The MRT in Taipei is very convenient. It can go to any place where I want to go. After this wonderful trip, I think planning a trip is fun and easy. You can try to get a fantastic trip with your friends.